Saturday, February 4, 2017

OUGD503 - TBWA Papyrus: Final Crit



















Feedback

  • This looks like a design I would see in a colouring book!
  • I like the diverse patterns - it gives you more room to colour
  • When I'm stressed too I also like to listen to calm, relaxing sounds. I think you have shown it nicely.
  • I like how the design flows because it gives a sense of direction.
  • I like the typeface but I think it could do with being bold. The design looks very lively too.
  • This seems fun to colour in! I would but this.
  • Waves are not something you really think of in colouring books because its usually like animals, flowers or scenery but I think it's a good idea and a good design.
  • I like how you've filled the page but without the design being overwhelming.
Based on the feedback, they have been positive as they like the variations of patterns and shapes used so that it gives them different things to colour in. As for the comment about the typeface, I do slightly agree however I don't want the typeface to take away from the design itself.

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