Friday, November 13, 2015

'Brash' crit


I produced a set of 3 questions for my final brash typeface and the reviews were:

  1. Does the final typeface design effectively communicate the word ‘brash’?
       Yes, hard cut edges.
       Yes cause it’s bold, in your face.
       Yes, very bold colours too.
       Very bold, stands out.
       I believe so, the non-linear stylisations to the letterform give a sense of rush and a lack of care.
       Yes, communicates it well but not as outgoing as it could be.
       Yes, the way some letters take up lots of room makes a bold statement, words aren’t confined.
       Yes bold in your face makes it stand out.
       Yes, harsh angles, bold.
       Yes I like the idea of a modern take on an old word. The slight changes in italicised type is a clever concept.
       Yes due to it’s bold and eye catching design.
       “Brash” is a word that makes you think in something unexpected and crazy. I think your design stayed subtle, which is ok, but lacks some craziness.
       You had a hard word and communicated it well with your typeface.

  1. Where do you think the type will be used?
       Product packaging & advertising or comic books.
       Magazine covers.
       Editorial and website.
       Billboards and advertisements, can imagine it moving or flashing.
       For display purposes-signage-website-editorial-some brandings.
       Fashion and lifestyle journals, perfect for a title due to the bold design.
       Magazine or junk food branding.
       Display and wacky play area (warehouse)
       Posters, large scale.
       Posters for a loud, in your face brand. Maybe a skate boarding company.
       Posters/magazine cover & article & band posters.
       Anywhere really, it’s very adaptable! Perfect for display type, but maybe too complex for copy text.
       Posters! Shop sign.
       Fashion for skateboarders or surfers.
       Your typeface would work well on signage and posters/billboards. It would not work well as a block of text.
       Magazines, adverts, signs.
       The uses would be book publishing/posters and reference for LEGO design.

  1. What did you think at first when you saw the typeface?
       Reminds me of Lush the soap brand.
       It has a lot of energy.
       Very bold and striking (in your face) (colour consideration). Lovely colour choices, opposing colours add to this idea of ‘brash’.
       I thought it made a statement.
       Very striking due to the use of colours.
       Loud, comic-y (not funny) style.
       Pink Panther typeface because of irregularities. I like the angular crossbars & that it relates to the adjective.
       Modern, contemporary, fun, nice colours. Has a lot of emotions.
       In your face, immature.
       I could have more modifications.
       Works well in colour versions – strong.
Other feedback:
·      Nice use of colours.
·      Like the use of contrasting/opposite colours.
·      Upper case, good choice.
·      Nice colour presentation.
·      Good use of words in ‘manifesto’ quirky – loud etc.
·      I would avoid using unique to define something (manifesto). You could say the contradiction between words and shapes makes it an interesting choice so far….

Feedback summary:
I have had mainly positive feedback in regards to my ‘brash’ typeface. Most people said that it is a bold typeface and does stand out well as it catches the eye. They have described the type as being striking, energy fueled, loud, comic-like, modern, contemporary, immature and has a lot of emotion. However, I did receive some comments that said to it more audacious and prominent and that I could’ve done more to make it look more brash.

The typeface could be seen in magazine covers, product packaging, advertising, comic books, editorial, websites, billboards, signage, fashion and lifestyle journals, posters, shop signs and book publishing. This gives me a wide range to work with since I thought it’ll only look good on posters and album covers. The typeface would not work well in a block of text as said by a reviewer, which is understandable since the type looks too bold and thick to be easily read.

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