As most of the sculptures were quite simple, I wanted my logo to also be simple because I think by overdoing it gives a false representation of the sculptures in the park. I tried to make a silhouette of each design so that I could put the logo into it without it being overcrowded by different patterns and colours. All my design work were made on Photoshop using a magnetic line tool and by using the images as a guideline for the sculptures.
The first three designs that I made were sculptures made by Barbara Hepworth. I think the designs look too simple and boring. I wanted to add colour to the sculptures but like the original sculpture, they are one solid colour, which is back. I feel if I used a different colour, it would give a false representation of the sculptures so I decided that these three designs wouldn't work out because they lack interest.
I then tried incorporating the sculptures into their exiting logo. I quite like the first three but still, I thought I could make an even better logo. I like it because it ties into their exiting logo which will be more familiar to the public. The fourth one, I placed all three sculptures inside the logo but I felt that the placement looked all wrong and plain at the top as opposed to the bottom of the logo. The final one, I don't like because it looks too much like a gravestone which would definitely not represent the park. I did experiment with it though by putting the other two sculptures inside the holes and added the 'YSP' but I still didn't like it.
Feedback:
- Symbol almost dwarf the logo - but using it smaller would make the proportions better. Good incorporation of Barbara Hepworths designs. Almost a bit too angular? Softer corners would make it look more natural. Good work though
- Like the initial shapes research
- Might be harder to read on a smaller scale
- Good range of starting points
- Identified that Barbara Hepworth is an iconic and simplistic sculptress
- Experiment a little more
- Excellent to test logo alongside existing logo type
- Would be good to see sketches and design development
- Test at different scales
- Take designs further
- Good range of compositional variations
- Using existing logo to maintain usual language of YSP
- Good visual representation of sculptures
- Two tone colour works the best
- I think the letters that go across the bottom of the image (YSP) looks good as it is more clear and effective
- Simple but effective
- Needed more to the presentation, very quick
- Like the two tones of colour
- Great experimentation with sculpture design
- Good colour choices & how you made the letters into a sculpture was good
- Maybe more minimal
- Try more ideas of colour
- Two tones work
- Good ideas
- Great use of negative space
- Lots of good development and ideas
- Colour scheme works very well - good complimentary colours together
- Nice use of current logo
- Very detailed scale wise
- Good representation of sculpture
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