After trying out the design, it did appear as it was supposed to and worked. After asking people for some quick feedback of the design, they said that it did work well but the mouth looks slightly odd when it is smiling as it is just a line and white space around it. Therefore I should try it with the colour filled in with the line so it looks more cohesive. The other feedback that I received was that the logo is too close to the words and the slit of the tab so that I should maybe try and put it somewhere else. For the inside area where the mind map is, the head looks weird and it would maybe look better just as a silhouette of a head without hair.
From the feedback, the leaflet was revised so that it would more appear cleaner and less confusing. Having done the mock up, the design does look better with the changes as it is more clear and easy to read.
For the additional information card, to make it cohesive with the leaflet, it was also printed A5 size but I was also aware that First Aid kits comes in different sizes therefore, decided to print it on A6 too.
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