OUGD505 - Leeds Public Spaces: Final Feedback

Feedback

• The design looks grainy and worn which gives it an outdated effect which is almost reminiscent. 
• The pennies on the design works well with the heavy typeface design and counteracts that feature.
• The colours are very minimal so nothing clashes. The design looks appealing due to the texture of the print.
• I like how it has the original slogan on - the pennies also so well with the message.
• I like how the pennies tie the design together because the 'penny' reference is everywhere.
• The colours used on the design is uplifting and subtle so it really does look like a celebration.

The feedback received were positive and has made me glad that I used screen print as the second design method as the lino print obviously did not work. The comments about outdated look is what I wanted to show though as it shows Marks & Spencer is old but I wanted to celebrate the massive success it has turned into after the stall at Kirkstall Market. There is also a lot of penny references as that is how the stall originally started out - selling thread, household items, needles and now they sell clothes, food, gifts and skincare so it just shows how successful the brand has turned into.