Wednesday, April 5, 2017

OUGD505 - Leeds Public Spaces: Feedback


















Feedback
  • The concept is good however I'm not too sure about the layout.
  • Wow. The lino must've taken ages! It is a lovely print but it doesn't really mesh well.
  • Maybe try the layout vertical instead of horizontal.
  • I like the colours used because they are minimal and doesn't look too bad against the red background.
  • It seems like there has been good intentions here but it doesn't work very well.
  • Nice lino cuts but the placements don't work.
  • I think you should maybe try repeating the 1ps?
After reading the feedback again, I do wholly agree with the feedback. I found it difficult to use the lino print and place them into a position that would be suitable. I did intent to just have the slogan on the A3 design but then I decided to add other bits and it just didn't turn out well. I am hoping to screen print it instead as it just did not work.

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